slow circles

fingertips trace
            slow circles on his temples
           i gaze down
          barely whisper-
                      
                   "god...     i love your mouth"

he pauses
       searches my hooded eyes
                  
                  
     "i meant it...     you know?
          
            - i'd move   heaven and earth for you"
  

my back arches involuntarily
                  
                        " you already are..."

Reviews

[Richard Layne]

Sensually short
The brevity in this is powerful

[AJ Kristiansen]

I love the simplicity of your writing... you often use few words but convey a strong message... and this is what you've done again. So much reading between the lines... amazing!! Thanks!! xxxx

[Tree]

Stumbled across this piece and am glad I did. One of those pieces that peels away the excess noise of a moment and leaves you pure essence. I really enjoyed this read, and respect what you have accomplished here.

[zainul]

Superb and sweet piece.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Tjhis seems to be the long and short of it
and if this continues the whole situation
may be buried beneath an avalanche of
emotion produced by those simple few
words.
Cute, sensuous, interesting, exciting.
Thank you ,
---- Eagle Cruagh

[NoelleRash]

This is romance but its unusual. I like it. Very Charming

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the form and the romance here. This is beautiful.

[ba_mcfarlane]

uhhhh....wow? Sensual write, spare without a word wasted...skilled

[Whiskurz]

A great write filled with romance......Thanks for sharing.....Whisk

[The Winter Grey]

Heartfelt and intense. Gripping in a most unusual way.