Chapter 3A Chapter by MolentoWhoo, its done. I expect that Chapters 4-6 and possibly 7-8 will be done soon edit: I found some grammatical mistakes, so I fixed themMolento
opened his eyes. Above him, late evening light streamed through a window,
illuminating swirling clouds of dust. Molento turned his head and saw a table
and some chairs. For a moment, Molento wondered where he was. Then it all came
flooding back to him: waking up with no clue about anything, Eliena, David, the
plow, the village, John, the Nekons, the castle, and the fight. Then, some
older memories: the Army, two letters, the flight, and the arrow. Other than
that, nothing. Molento
sat up, bandages on the left side of his torso and left arm constricting his
movement. From his new vantage point higher up from the floor, Molento realized
that Eliena was sitting in one of the chairs, head on the table, apparently
asleep. David
walked in the front door and looked over at the corner where Molento sat. “Ah,
good, you’re awake,” he commented. “Wergh,”
Molento responded. “I
wanted to talk to you about something.” He
pulled up a chair and sat in it, taking care to not wake Eliena. “Where exactly
did you go to run away from the Nekons,” he asked, facing Molento. Molento’s
head started throbbing, and his eyes drooped. “The castle.” “What
castle?” “The
one above the… village,” he said, a huge yawn cutting through his sentence. “What!
How did you get up there? I know you could fly, but what about Eliena? For that
matter, how did you outrun the Nekons? Eliena can’t fly, and she certainly
can’t outrun Nekons.” “I…
carried… her,” two huge yawns separated his words. “What!
You carried her? That distance? Are you crazy?” “It
was… important… and I… probably am… slightly…crazy.” “Why
was it important to you?” “No
more… civilians… should get… hurt.” Having
said that, Molento’s eyes closed and he immediately fell asleep once more. Eliena
woke up. She looked around, surprised. Judging by the light, she had been
asleep for a few hours. Molento still lay before her, on the bedroll her and
her father had rolled out for him the day before. “I
wonder if he’s alright,” Eliena worried to herself, not knowing her father was
right behind her, “he’s been asleep for so long.” “He
woke up earlier,” David said, startling Eliena, “We talked for a minute or two
before he fell asleep again.” “What
did you talk about?” “What
happened when you two ran from the Nekons? Judging by what he told me and what
I witnessed myself, he wore himself out to keep you safe.” “I
wonder why he did all that to protect me.” “He
said it was because he didn’t want more civilians to get hurt, whatever that
means. Come, let’s have dinner, he needs to rest and recover, but he’ll be
fine.” Eliena
continued to look at Molento, unconvinced. David put his hand on her shoulder
and she got up reluctantly. Molento
woke up again. This time, bright morning light filled the house, and Eliena was
nowhere to be seen. He sat up and looked around. Finding the room empty, he
stood up and looked out the window. Still finding no one, he walked over to the
door and reached for the knob with his left hand. Blinding pain in his shoulder
stopped him before he had lifted his arm more than a few inches, and he let his
hand flop down to his side. Molento
reached for the knob again, this time with his right hand. Opening the door
slowly, Molento checked to make sure that no one was around. Still not seeing
anyone, he continued outside and closed the door behind him. Around
him, the farm was completely plowed and planted, but the neat, orderly rows
were completely deserted. “How long was I
out,” Molento thought as he looked around. He heard something at the back
of the house, and started his way towards it. As
he rounded the corner, Molento was presented with a strange sight. Eliena was
standing on the roof, and a ladder stretched up, allowing access. David stood
about twenty feet away from the house, beckoning her to jump. Neither had
noticed Molento yet, so he leaned back and rested on the wall. “Come
on,” David said to Eliena, “Jump down, extend your wings and fly.” “I-I
don’t think it’s that simple,” Eliena replied, voice quavering with fear, “I
can’t do this, I’m climbing down.” Eliena
started to turn to head back to the ladder, but she lost her footing and fell.
Immediately, her wings snapped open, fitting through slits cut into the back of
her shirt, and she gently floated down. Astonished, she touched down right in
front of her father. A grin split David’s face in half. Seizing
the chance to let them know he was watching, Molento started clapping slowly
and walked over to them. At the sound of the applause, Eliena and David turned
toward Molento, surprised. “Look
who’s awake,” David said dryly, “took ya long enough; you were out about two
days.” “Really,
that long,” Molento asked, surprised. “Yes,
and you’re lucky it wasn’t longer. In the state you were in, you should’ve been
resting, not running around and getting into fights where you were hopelessly
outnumbered.” “Would
you rather I hadn’t?” David
sighed in resignation. “No.” “Then
what’s done is done. It needed doing. I survived, Eliena survived, you
survived, so no use dwelling on it any longer.” Turning
to Eliena, he continued. “Nice flying for a beginner, but how about I show you
how an expert does it?” “No,”
David answered for her, “I am not going to let you kill yourself after saving
Eliena’s, and possibly my, life. You are going to go back and rest.” “Ah,
you worry too much,” Molento replied, walking towards the ladder, “I’m not
going to kill myself. I’ll be fine.” Molento
climbed up the ladder and walked over to where Eliena had been standing a
minute ago, not even slipping slightly on the slick surface of the roof. “Watch
a master at work,” he said, and he jumped. Midair, he decided to mess with them
a little. Timing it just right, at the top of his jump, he yelled, “Oops, I
forgot how to fly,” and allowed himself to fall towards the ground. David
and Eliena watched in horror, believing that Molento was about to get seriously
injured. At the last possible second, however, he flared his wings, swooped
gracefully back up, beet skimming the ground at the bottom of his dive. “Just
kidding,” he laughed, seeing the looks on Eliena and David’s faces. “You
idiot,” Eliena yelled once she recovered from the shock, “Why did you do that?
I’ll kill you for pulling a numbskull trick like that!” “Only
if you can catch me,” Molento taunted, landing on the roof again. Eliena,
shouting in rage, ran over to the ladder and started climbing up it. As soon as
she got up on the roof, she started to storm after Molento, sliding
dangerously. Molento slowly backed up until he reached the peak of the roof,
and turned, walking backwards along it until he was at the edge of the roof.
Eliena, who had followed him up to the peak of the roof, her feet gaining
better traction, started to approach Molento faster, looking triumphant. “I’ve
got you now,” she cried. “Nope,”
Molento responded calmly, “You’re forgetting one thing.” “Oh,
and what’s that,” Eliena demanded, reaching him. “I
know how to fly.” Molento
jumped backwards, narrowly avoiding Eliena’s hand as she reached out to grab
his shirt, did a back flip in midair, and hovered beside the house, just
outside of reach. “You-
just- I- you- Grrrraaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh,” Eliena yelled, frustrated, and jumped
out after him. Molento merely flew backwards and watched as Eliena slowly
started to lose altitude. “You’re
not doing it right,” Molento told her. “No,
really,” Eliena replied sarcastically. “Just
watch my wings,” Molento continued, ignoring her outburst. Eliena
looked closer and noticed that Molento’s wings weren’t completely still, as she
had previously thought, but moving slightly back and forth, keeping him aloft. “It
almost looks lit you’re treading water,” Eliena commented, copying him. “Doing
what,” Molento asked, mystified. “Treading
wa- you don’t remember how swim?” “I
don’t think I ever learned. Not that I don’t like water, it’s just I never
learned.” “Does
that mean you remember?” “Nope.” On
that senseless note, Molento swooped down and landed on the ground. “You
aren’t acting injured,” Eliena noticed, landing next to him. “I
guess I can handle pain; I didn’t even notice.” “Hmm,”
Eliena responded, following him as he walked through the field, carefully
avoiding the seeds. “Where are you going,” she asked. Molento
didn’t respond; instead he stopped, his eyes fixed on a point off in the
distance. Looking up, Eliena followed his gaze. “The castle,” she thought, “He’s
looking at the castle.” After
a long silence, Eliena noticed that Molento’s shoulders were shaking and tears
were silently rolling down his face. She reached out a hand and rested it on
his good shoulder. “It
wasn’t your fault,” she assured, “there was no way you could have stopped it.” “You
don’t know that,” he responded his voice hollow and defeated, hoarse from his
tears, “You weren’t there, you don’t know that.” “No,
but it wasn’t your fault, you weren’t responsible for them, it wasn’t you decision.” “Yes
it was.” “What?” “I
built the Army from scratch. I was their leader. They believed in me, they
believed that I would keep them safe, even though only a handful of people
actually saw me or heard me speak. I used my second-in-commands for that.” “Why?” “I’m
an abomination- half Avin, half Nekon. I’m also only a child. Who would follow
me?” “I
would.” Molento
turned to Eliena, astonished. “But you’ve only known me a few days, and in that
time I jeopardized your life multiple times.” Eliena
thought about that for a moment or two. True, he had put her life in danger,
but, inexplicably, throughout the whole thing, she had felt safe. Aloud, she
said, “Yes, but you also saved it multiple times.” Molento
smiled and turned back to the castle, eyes dry. “Thank you,” he said. “For
what?” “For
making me believe in myself again.” Molento
examined the ruined castle high above them; his eyes narrowed as he noticed
something. “There’s movement up there.” “What!
Where,” Eliena asked, turning to look at the castle, “I don’t see anything.” “There,
look,” Molento insisted, “It looks like there are people up there.” Eliena
looked again, and this time noticed small dots of color moving around the
castle. “I’m
going to go check it out,” Molento said, getting ready to fly. “Wait,
what if they’re not friendly? I’m coming with you, just wait a second.” Eliena
ran back into the house and a moment later ran back out, carrying Molento’s
sword belt and her spear. “We’ll
be back soon,” she shouted to her father. “Where
are you going,” David yelled back. “Just
going to fly around.” Eliena
reached Molento and handed him his swords and he buckled them back on. “Thanks,”
he said, “but you shouldn’t come with me, it might be dangerous.” “I’m
coming,” Eliena said, rising into the air. “Alright,
then,” Molento conceded, rising alongside her, “but why didn’t you tell your
father where we’re going?” “He’ll
just worry too much.” They
continued to rise as they talked. Soon they were level with the castle, but
they continued rising until they were level with the top of the mountain the
castle was on. Locking his wings, Molento glided towards the castle, and Eliena
followed suit. “Why
are we so high,” Eliena asked, pulling up next to Molento. “In
case they’re not friendly,” Molento responded. As
they got closer, Molento thought he recognized at least some of the figures.
They glided until they were directly above the castle. Three hundred feet
below, about forty or fifty figures milled around, watching them. One of the
figures ran over to another, and bits of a conversation drifted up to Molento
and Eliena. “One…
different.” “How…” “…
Has fur.” The
one figure looked back up and yelled at them. “You can come down now, friend.” © 2011 Molento |
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Added on December 21, 2011 Last Updated on December 21, 2011 Previous Versions AuthorMolentoTXAboutI started writing a book (The Story of Molento), but I didn't like where it was going, so I stopped it, and I created a new book (Molento), with the same characters, but different story. When I'm not.. more..Writing
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