The Story of Molento- Book 1: The Journey Begins

The Story of Molento- Book 1: The Journey Begins

A Book by Molento


© 2011 Molento


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Molento
tell me what you think of this, this is my first time writing and I want to know how to get better
there will probably be more later on if I get good reviews/ feedback
p.s. i dont know if this is going to be the only book or the first in a series

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Well, the font is big. I thought it was a book not a short story, and you need to seperate it into paragraphs for each subject. Create a new paragraph for each different speaker to.

EDIT: Ok good, now it's a book

Posted 13 Years Ago


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 Added on March 17, 2011
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