Holi Came!!!

For a Indian Festival filled with vibrant colors and unforgettable memories, a Senryu

Holi Came!!!                                        (Senryu)    

English Translation:

Holi came, go, go!

Get your pichkaris, gulal,

It is color day!

Hindi Translation:

Holi aayi ja!
Pichkari lo, gulaal,
Rango ka din hai!

Author's Note

Holi is celebrated on 14 March which is today. You get a water gun (Pichkari) and fill it with colored water and start shooting others. Gulal is also used as color but you can also use it on someone's face. We also get balloons, fill it with water and start throwing at others. This usually happens in the morning like 10 am.

There is a religious story about a boy named Krishna and a girl named Radha. Radha's face was bright while Krishna's was blue and dark. So he went to complain to his mother. His mother said to color Radha's face. So he went and colored Radha's face. This story made the tradition of Holi, but there are still more stories.

Reviews

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

Beautiful poem Martiya! It is really nice that you provided translations for both the English and Hindi languages! This colour day sounds so fun!!!

[Martiya Daman]

Yes Efxaris, this day is truly fun! You go out and splash! Thanks for your review tho!

[Dylan Macadham]

Beautiful Senryu Martiya! :)
...except Oops, line 3 has 6 syll's. Delte the "As" and it's perfect!😃

[Martiya Daman]

Fixed! Thanks for the review Dylan!

[Dylan Macadham]

a Quick Fix!!! Perfect :)

[Alice Reiht]

wow Martiya this sounds super fun! wish I could've been there!

[Martiya Daman]

Yep it is a fun festival! It shapes our culture and wisdom. Thanks for reading, Alice.

[Arundass TP]

Simple narrative story and nicely written poem on Holi celebration. Loved it

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for your review, Arun.