Chapter 10: Forever Gone...

The next day, Mericy and Itin walked up to the forest. They walked to the spot where the house WAS... "Where is the house... I swear it was here..." Said Mericy. "Look, there is a TV, with a DVD..." Itin said. They both inserterd the DVD. 

"Haha, you thought you could escape?" It was a video of Dark Torn. Flashing videos came of Ferman. "HE-LP" A picture of Tick Man came. "The clock moves foward, But I don't..." 

Tick Tock sounds come again. Terrifying memories and nightmares lingered there. They both terrified leave the forest. Ferman was never to be seen again.

Reviews

[Mapledew]

It was pretty good, but could have added more context and idioms or see-not-tell phrases.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for the review, Maple. Will surely add improvements in my future analogs if comes.

[Beren Ongur]

AH NO! I didn’t comment to others cause STORY FLOWED! This is so great Martiya I loved this! Kinda reminded me some Netflix shows.
Even though I don’t like horror, I really enjoyed this one! But I’m so mad about Ferman, GIVE HIM BACK TO US!

I love Itin, kinda had a crush.

you are so talented, THIS IS A GREAT ONE. WOW POWERFUL

[Martiya Daman]

I like Ferman as well, but now he is gone... Sorry... Thanks for the lovely review even on a spooky book, Beren!

[Beren Ongur]

Trust me I don’t like horror at all! And thank for you not publishing at night, i couldn’t sleep…

[Martiya Daman]

I am not a fan of horror, but analog's the best. It is evening for me, lucky as well! We both live in Asia. Kinda...

[Beren Ongur]

It’s noon here, THANK GOD FOR ME