Chapter 4: The DVD Of The Dark

Chapter 4: The DVD Of The Dark

A Chapter by Martiya Daman

It was total chaos. Ferman reached the bottom and stopped. Itin crashed into him and Mericy crashed into him. They looked up, them place was made up of black, reddish stone bricks, and the place smelled rotten. 
They heard a loud thud, and realised the door again had been closed. But there was not turning back now.
Itin wandered out meanwhile others were dizzy. "Guys, look, a tape!" He said. Mericy came closer. "It is a DVD, and a TV is over there! Let us watch it!" She said excitedly. They inserted the DVD and watched it.
(The video script:)

Robert: So Louis, you say there are entities in your house?
Louis: Yes sir.
Robert: And what sounds do they make?
Louis: It is like, Tick-Tock-Tick-Tock. They are coming from that stairs.
Robert: You're stupid! I am checking down there.
(Goes)
See, there is noth- AAAAA!!!
Louis: What sir? I am coming, where are yo- AAAAA!!!
Creepy and glitchy, corupt images starting popping up of entities and they were munching on Robert and Louis. 

One of them was the Dark Torn, all dark, and black in colour torn revealing human skin.
The other one was the Tick Man, he was all black with thin legs and arms and his head was a weathered clock. Near him was like mini versions of him which were helpers, Swing Little Tocks.
You know about them, but for now, the group know something is OFF.


© 2025 Martiya Daman


Author's Note

Martiya Daman
Sorry if there are grammar mistakes, plz tell me if there are :)

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WHAT? NO! I hear my heartbeat! I don’t think I can read more… but I wanna know the end. Let’s take a deep breath

Ps: i don’t know the rest but if the kids don’t know the Robert’s and Louis’s name, it might be better if we don’t know too. You can talk about their physical appearance. Cause we know Louis’s name cause Robert said, but kids don’t know Robert I GUESS. this is just my comment from here

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Beren Ongur

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I WANNA COMMENT
Martiya Daman

2 Days Ago

Okay then, no one stops you
Martiya Daman

2 Days Ago

Sure then I will change that

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Martiya Daman
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