Missed It!

A limerick

Missed  It!                                     (Limerick)

Run, you almost missed the bus,

Shout, don't be in a fuss...

Ah, you missed it, dear!

You were so near!

Learn to wave your hand, a must!

Author's Note

What do you think

Reviews

[Beren]

Enjoyed this one so much! I needed that, probably I’m gonna say this out loud every day! You use words great!

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for the review, Beren!

[Inkspire]

Simple
We all might have lost the bus atleast once
I am this person who never wave
Always regret when it happens

[Martiya Daman]

Same, I have missed like 5 times probably as well. I don't think there is a single person who hasn't expect in most lucky scenarios.

I was one who also never wave, and I regret it. Thanks for your review.

[Dylan Macadham]

I like this limerick, Martiya :) ... Haha, here even when you wave your hands they don't always stop.

[Martiya Daman]

Yes, but I imagined that the boy did not even know how to wave his hand towards the boy sooooo.... But I am glad you liked the limerick!

Thanks for the review, Dylan!

[Dylan Macadham]

... I meant, here in Seattle they don't always stop if people wave :) ...Nice Limerick!

[A.H.]

haha, this is nice read. i think, we all have a missed a bus in our lives. nice description and captured the feelings aptly. we must learn to wave a hand, atleast we might have a chance to get on to the bus, hehe :)
nice writing, Martiya!

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for the review, Abhi! I might have missed school a few times, but doesn't stop all us from walking or driving to school!

[A.H.]

yes, never miss school... you miss a day of learning, so totally agree!