Beware!

Beware!

A Poem by Martiya Daman
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A Senryu about Flatterers

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Beware!                                      (Senryu)
Beware, or be scammed,
Why are there such flatterers?
Lies, we give money...

© 2025 Martiya Daman


Author's Note

Martiya Daman
Flatterers are people who lie to us to get advantage.

For example, someone says "You are smart". You are happy, and you give them money cause they praised you. But in reality, they are lying and just got free money.

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I would like to know the reason you wrote this. You are absolutely right, sometimes people lie to gain something, it happens in every relationship. But sometimes we don't realize it, and believe me it is not always our fault. Some people can be very persuasive. thank you for sharing. i like the way how you are always so honest with your words!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

Exactly! They are called flatters. So be aware who you can trust.
Thanks for the lovely revie.. read more



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But the ones you really have to worry about aren’t the ones that are bad at it. It’s the flattery that you don’t notice at first that will get you.
Although some of the scams are laughably bad now. I’m probably just encouraging them but sometimes it’s too much fun not to pretend to play along for a bit.


Posted 1 Month Ago


Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

You are right, but children should be aware though. Thanks for the review, Green.
Oops! :) I think you meant "flatterers", but it's 3 syllables.
Also Beware "of", is better than "from."

Posted 1 Month Ago


Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

Better now? :)
Dylan Macadham

1 Month Ago

Much Better! :)
Flatterers are indeed.

May I sell you a job? You've already been sold on a purpose... (we can pretend it's anti flattery)

Posted 1 Month Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Month Ago

Are you threatening me sir?
Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

No? .
Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

I was just acknowledging your review, no threat intended.
I would like to know the reason you wrote this. You are absolutely right, sometimes people lie to gain something, it happens in every relationship. But sometimes we don't realize it, and believe me it is not always our fault. Some people can be very persuasive. thank you for sharing. i like the way how you are always so honest with your words!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

Exactly! They are called flatters. So be aware who you can trust.
Thanks for the lovely revie.. read more

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Added on February 24, 2025
Last Updated on February 26, 2025
Tags: Beware, Flatterers

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Martiya Daman
Martiya Daman

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