Daylight

Daylight

Down the dawn goes, 

Might the wind blows,

The Daylight comes,

The cold it shoves.

It arrived, all flowers dream,

Together seeing the gleam,

Trees covered with leaves,

Right after feeling the beams.

Children run up to the store,

Picking and buying ice-cream,

Wanting to know the sun's lore,

It was like a dream.

Although the sun shined for billions,

Forever keeps for Daylight,

Also helps millions,

Bringing joy and light.

Reviews

[Twilight]

"Forever keeps for daylight", can only ever be a dreamy aspiration. Indeed, daylight without interval; would ruin crops and disrupt the planet's ecosystem.

But, in the realm of poetry, emotions and new perceptions - can freely trump any scientific realities. And, this charming poem certainly sends a variety of positively sunny vibes - for Martiya's readership.!

Perhaps, these warm sunny vibes; will help to chase away my country's current surplus - of dull and damp weather lol? I have my doubts about such a hope, but shall keep my fingers crossed (just in case!) 🤞.

Keep calm and carry on writing, my young friend...

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for reading and taking your time, Julian. 😃

[Dylan Macadham]

A feel-good write, Martiya! Keep it up :)

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for reading and taking your time, Dylan. Have a wonderful day ahead, or have a good nap time? I don't know your timezone, then, um... Have a wonderful time? :)

[Dylan Macadham]

.........🙂

[Sami Khalil]

It sure did, does for eons; we need its light and warmth; other creatures do too.
A natural leaning poem.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks for taking your time and reading, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome