Loyalty

Loyalty

Needing someone reliable,

Someone we can trust,

Somebody who might be deniable,

The job might rust.

Sticking together, not one piece,

Combining ideas together,

Instead of anger, peace,

Feelings like a feather.

A sense of duty,

Being firm,

In Loyalty's beauty,

The only thing to confirm.

Fostering unity,

Promoting trust,

Loyalty with a good community,

People, we can adjust.

Author's Note

Tell me if I missed something or did a mistake...

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The poem was full of lovely thoughts and it's clear they came from a kind and generous heart. I enjoyed the read.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks. Will fix it.

[Neville]

You can beat an egg and a drum .. but you just can't beat loyalty .. I truly think trust is priceless .. and I am so glad I felt drawn to this page .. Kindest Regards, Neville

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Neville for reading.

[Neville]

My absolute pleasure 😎👍

[Twilight]

This expresses some excellent values for people to have, Martiya. If only our politicians could be more like this lol..?

You have even touched upon additional aspects of friendship too, over and above loyalty itself.

Another thought. You recently demonstrated loyalty to that best friend, who used to blackmail you; because you remained a loyal friend to her - despite that blackmailing behaviour.

[Martiya Daman]

I agree. The politicians and the government should be loyal. Instead just child labour, dirty streets, no free education for children who are from poor families or do not have a family.

[Martiya Daman]

True. Both friend have to be loyal equally to each other and combine their own separate ideas to create a huge idea.

[Martiya Daman]

I will share her this next time…