Why?

Why?

A Poem by Martiya Daman

Why?
Oh People, Why the trashing,
Why there are cars crashing?
Please be super careful,
The world should be beautiful.

Oh Lord, Why are we killing,
Why aren't we willing?
To help our world,
Give other morals.

Oh Leaders, Why wars,
With guns and without swords?
Please stop, or the world will end,
Because the world can't mend.

Oh Government, Why no care?
Nobody can handle to bare.
I ask everyone, "Why?"
They answer with a lie.

© 2024 Martiya Daman


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I feel immensely happy to be admiring a nine-year-old kid's craftsmanship. Keep up the phenomenal work! I'm glad to have had the chance to see it.
However, I have to admit that I do feel envious, though. My envy is proof that age really is just a number when it comes to hard work and dedication. Your writing skills surpass those of most people whose works I've read till now.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Martiya Daman

1 Month Ago

Thanks for the review, Dheeraj. I am glad you liked it.

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Added on December 27, 2024
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Martiya Daman
Martiya Daman

I'll be 10 soon!!!, Just waiting!, India



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I am just writing stories & poems and making others smile, I like it. I am 9 years old and Indian, Glad you came to read my profile. It's definetly a pleasure to write here. My thought: Dreams are .. more..

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