Brave Or Fear

Brave Or Fear

When I feel scared

I cannot bear,

Of my fears in my head,

But my brave feel could lead.

When my heart races,

It hits me like maces,

but my brave feeling helped,

And my instincts were involved.

When I was in the dark,

I couldn't find my mark,

The fear came to me,

But the brave guards me like a tree.

Oh Lord, Why the fear?

Something that gives tears.

Oh Lord, Why the brave?

That leads me out of the cave.

Either it's brave or fear,

Both of them I hear.

Reviews

[Beren]

I really liked how you characterised both of them, I think you did a great job!But let me tell you a secret; fear and courage are not so different from each other, in fact you can think of them as twin brothers with opposite characters, although they are different, they were born in the same family. You couldn't understand one without the other. And I think the greatest courage is to face your fear. Everything related to fear comes from courage!

accepting that you are afraid, talking about your fear, fighting your fear. Courage is already in these. They are brothers.You are about to mend fences between these two brothers. And writing is the courage to face your fears. I am proud of you. You are braver than you think.

[Martiya Daman]

That is an amazing fact! Courage and fear work together, I forgot about that!

In courage, fear is there and in fear, courage it there. Thanks for the lovely review as well Beren!

[Martiya Daman]

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