Something Against Force

Something Against Force

I felt the force of love,

But there was something like a shove,

I felt the force of fear,

which was very near.

When I have problem with the force of life,

It is frozen just like ice,

When I see my parents,

I forget about achievements.

When I look into someone's eyes,

I never feel the force to rise,

I never feel ever so wise,

I don't even know if I am right.

When there's force with pain,

I feel fear in my veins,

When there's something against force,

I feel alone in another verse.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

there is a strange energy guiding us in life. a force, that's as fitting as any other word. i dont know what to call it. and as we are tossed and turned by these forces, feeling like a leaf lost in a breeze, there comes a slight desire to just give in to it. 'When there's something against force, I feel alone in another verse.' i feel i should ride this wave and hope i can surf it towards the shore.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Ern for reading!

[Efxaris Arampatzi]

this poem is a masterpiece! beautiful rhyming, lovely content, you are a professional!

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks, Efxaris!

[Soren]

a very poignant poem of feelings and emotions that drive us as human beings and make us who we are. Very nicely written.

[Martiya Daman]

Thanks Soren

[Martiya Daman]

Merry Christmas!