Stupid Emotion

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But don't you ever get the feeling,
that someone hated your guts?
Ever feel like you're unloved,
and you're making a huge fuss?

My intentions are simple,
Life isn't what it use to be
It's certianly not a dream,
nor a faint fantasy.

It's a pain in the guts,
this emotion called love,
it's killing me inside,
like getting electrified from above.

The rage keeps burning,
behind my mask,
it's like doing a dangerous experiment,
using a broken flask.

Why am I so stupid?
I keep asking in my head,
Why did I fall for it?
Maybe because I was dead?

That emotion,
had murdered me inside,
it took over my friends,
with only one look into their eye.

What should I do?
I know you were in this before,
Should I give up,
and walk through the door?

Author's Note

This IS my work. I'm just a lazy butt to re-type my work from the past. I just copied and pasted it from MY dA account: http://www.mellyburstofbayum.deviantart.com

Reviews

[RiverOfSilver]

What you find is not love. I know love. It's a pain in the butt, depending on the person...but it's not something that would cause rage. But nice poem. Emotional. Telling. I know the feeling. ~River (p.s. The other review was by my co writer, Silver. Just so you aren't confused.

[RiverOfSilver]

Wow.. If this means the same as I think it does, then it's how I feel right now.

If not, then it's still a really good poem!