Memories of You

Memories of You

A Poem by MellyBURSTOFbayum
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Old stuff x]

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Life goes on,
even when your dead.
Well guess what?
I don't give a damn.
But for some reason,
I can't get you out of my head.

It's time to let go,
It's time to be free,
from the body I'm leaving,
but vivid memories of you,
still exist to me.

© 2009 MellyBURSTOFbayum


Author's Note

MellyBURSTOFbayum
THIS IS MY WORK. DAMMIT ALL. I just copied it from MY account on dA.
http://www.mellyburstofbayum.deviantart.com

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You seem so critical of your work, but you have a talent. I love simplicity in poems. Yours is very straight forward and direct. Your poems tone is deeper than you give it credit for. I really like it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes on your future writings.

P.S. Most of my poems are "old stuff" too :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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MellyBURSTOFbayum
MellyBURSTOFbayum

Toronto, ON., Shh, it's a secret :), Canada



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I am Melissa. Yes, I am superior, and I'm lovable >;). I'm kind of disappointed in myself.. Can you believe? Likin someone for five years... and you were only thirteen! It's sort of pathetic of .. more..

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