True Love

EY, Don't critisize it. I was writing this at 3:00 AM, so get creative.

True Love

        I didn’t realise that this feeling was so strong, so … powerful. I couldn’t have this feeling with me anymore.

        I called Darien to tell him something. I cannot be with him anymore, because of what I am. If I keep staying with him, sooner or later, it would kill us both.

        Derien’s face was happy, he was looking at me as if I was the only person here. He took lifted my chin when he was infront of me, and pressed his lips softly against mine. This had to stop now.
        “Derien, there’s something I need to tell you,” I whispered against his lips.
        He parted his lips off mine, and smiled.
        “Yes?”
        I hesitated. I couldn’t believe I was doing this to him. My eyes started to water. I looked down, away from his face.
        “I-I cannot be with you anymore,” I whispered through my tears.
        His face fell. His eyes were burning with curiosity.
        “What? Why? Did I do something wrong?”
        “That’s the problem. You’re doing everything right. You are much more nicer that I thought Human boys would be,”
        “Wait, what do you mean about ‘human’?” he asked
        “Human, as in I’m not amongst your kind. I’m a Thermalclumbuler, as in, I’m not human. I’m actually an.. alien. I’ve never experienced love like this, and I cannot go on,”
       He was silent, probably stunned. We were silent for a long moment.
        “I-I don’t care what you are! You are like everything I need! The air, the sun, the wind,” he said. This was much harder than I thought.
        “Darien. I cannot love you, even though I must love you.     But I can’t,” I said, while the pain was going deep into my wound.
        “What do you mean? You can’t marry a human?”
        “No. It’s what we are. Us Thermalclumbulers cannot love anybody. The more we experience this feeling, we get weaker. Our bodies start to weaken, and we eventually…” I stopped. I was at the edge of loosing it. My tears started to run down my cheeks.
        “Eventually…?”
        “Eventually die. I cannot live with you, but I must. If I do, I must die because of this strong emotion. I’m already growing week, and I hate that feeling! You are everything I wanted, actually, you’re more than everything, and I can’t live with that. I’m sorry. I really do wish I could be human,”
        He was silent. I watched him, and suddenly, his tears start rolling down his cheeks. A sharp pain started to inflict me.
        He fell on his knees.
        “Don’t leave me! Don’t leave me…” he begged. It was unbearable to see him like this.
        “I’m going to have to. I’m sorry,” I whispered, as a sobbed.
        He got up, and grabbed my shoulders when I was about to turn away, never seeing him again. He pulled me against his warm chest. I tried to push away, but I was getting weaker by the second. If I didn’t turn away soon, I’ll be too weak to move, and eventually pass out.

        I tried again, but I couldn’t manage. His warm cheek was against my hair, and his tears were soaking in my hair. My eyes started to water, I believed it was time now to pass out.      I looked up and kissed his neck softly one last time. He used one of his hands, and lifted my chin, to kiss me softly once more. I closed my eyes. Tears started to run down my face, soaking his shirt once more.
        “Goodbye Derien. I love you with all my heart,” I whispered.
        “Don’t leave now!” He screamed through his tears.
I only had enough energy to say one more thing.
        “I must, for I am getting weak, and I am dying now. I love you, Derien.” I whispered as I slowly grew unconcious. I felt every part of my body loosen, my breathing started to slow, and I let go of him slowly, letting him hold me. Everything turned black.

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I felt a warm pressure point on my forehead. D****t. I thought I was dead.
I heard someone call my name in a proffesional voice.
“I think she’s awake. Mabye we should give her some space.
She’s just woke up, and she’s getting weaker. I’ll get her to stay alive, if I need to kill myself,”
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Yea, I stop here for a reason. Because I have no idea what to write next. Just tell let you people know, that she DOES wake up, and she DOES live because of the strong power of this emotion. ;) .. and mostly because I want you guys to be CREATIVE =D… And also I’m stumped. And it’s like 3:00 AM.
PEACE OUT BIOTCHES <33

Author's Note

DONT
MIND
SPELLING/GRAMMER
ERRORS D<

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Cute story !
An unusual twist at the end. This writer is a
master of the twist and it is great.
You must read your writing before you post it.
Most of the errors are simple typo errors or gross
spelling glitches and I am positive if you had read
it carefully before posting, you would have caught them.
Like all of your previous stories----it`s great !
---- Eagle Cruagh