Kiss of Death

Kiss of Death

A Story by MellyBURSTOFbayum
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This was actually to all of my Deviant friends. ;] OH And also, REALLY Violent ending.. But I haven't described it.. ;]

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Kiss of Death
By: Melissa
 
   I never thought that someone I loved would get hurt. I never actually thought that they were going to die because of this…
 
   David called me to meet him at the dock at sunset.
   David was my best friend, but the truth was, I loved him since the seventh grade, so about six years I have loved him. I didn’t want to ask him if he had feelings for me too. It’ll ruin our friendship if he didn’t love me back. I just can’t take that risk with him.
 I saw David at the dock on the Lake. The sun was just about to set over the horizon, and I walked towards David, cautiously, so I don’t frighten him.
   “David?” I softley said.
   David spun around, breathing uneven.
   “David are you okay?” I paniced.
   He stared at me for a long time, then sighed.
   “Yea I’m okay. I have something to confess before we go to university,” he whispered.
   “This is a good time to tell me. I have to tell you something to,” I whispered.
   What was I thinking? Well, I might as well tell him how I feel before we seprate.
   He hesitated for a minute. I waited patiently.
   “Julia, I- ” he paused. “I – I love you. I’ve loved you ever since seventh grade.” He confessed.
   I was shocked. My mouth started to hang open.
   He stared at me, dissapointed.
   “I didn’t want to sca –”
   I cut him off. I put my finger on his lips. Then I slowly inclinde my head towards his, until our lips touched. His lips were warm and soft. I declined away from him slowly to see his reaction.
   His emerald green eyes were opening, and he stared at me.
   “I loved you at the exact same time as you loved me,” I whispered.
   We stood there in silence for a breif moment, gazing into each others eyes. His dirty blond hair was blowing in the wind.
   We both smiled at each other, for a berief period of time.
   Suddenly, an arm grabbed me behind my neck, holding me into an iron grasp.
   My hearted to beat faster because of this o strucked horror. How could this happen?
   “David,” A deep voice snickered. “You don’t want anything to hurt her? You might aswell let me kill you now, before I stab her,” he threatened.
   David’s emerald eyes started to widen in horror. I could tell that he was thinking. I was going to turn himself in.
   I stared at him
   “No” I whispered.
   “Shut up, b***h” the voice threatened while he reached into his pocket for something. A knife. He compressed it against my throat.
   “Don’t hurt her,” David paniced, stepping towards me.
   “Don’t come near us. Until you agree to let me kill you.”
   “Why do you want me killed so badly?” David quietly asked.
   “You’re the one who girls adore. You get all the girls. And I’m the handsome one here. My girlfreind even thought you were handsome, and drooled over you. If you were dead, they’ll come crying to me,” the voice said, as if his planned worked.
   David took another step forward.
   The knife started to compress against my skin, cutting through my skin. I felt warm liquid ooze down my neck. Blood.
   David paniced again. He was 2 steps away from us.
   David took another step, but a bigger step than what he did, then I heard a loud noise.
   David was on his knees when I looked back, his eyes started to water. He stared at me, with sorry in his eyes.
 “I love you.” He whispered one last time, then he collapsed and hit his head against the wooden dock.
   My eyes started to water. My heart stopped.
   “NO!” I screamed through my tears.
   The voice behind me snickered, then threw me to the ground beside him, dropping his knife.
I hopelessly shook him, hoping for him to come back to life, but I knew that will never happen. Why did it have to be him?
I automaticly took the knife the man dropped, and let it fly until it stabbed through my chest. I didn’t want to live anywhere if he wasn’t there with me. Everything turned black.

 So another story like Romeo and Juliet.

© 2008 MellyBURSTOFbayum


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MellyBURSTOFbayum
Uhh, right. W.e.

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A very well written story, a very sad ending but never the less, a fine job.

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I am Melissa. Yes, I am superior, and I'm lovable >;). I'm kind of disappointed in myself.. Can you believe? Likin someone for five years... and you were only thirteen! It's sort of pathetic of .. more..

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