Evening Rain

A Poem by Maroon Surreal

Describing.

The little raindrops

Hitting the roof,

I am hearing from the ceiling,

Gives the evening

A cold breeze

And an inviting blue feeling.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal

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exotic flotsam

On odd melancholy, somewhat reflective mood overtakes me. Calm. Glad to be in, hearing nature's white noise. Well worded.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Aianarie (INACTIVE)

The title attracted me. This poem is short and sweet. I love the "inviting blue feeling". What a great description!

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tai Ryens

You explain the dropping of the soul's emotion during the evening when rain descends from the sky in an excellent way. There's so many thoughts behind such few words in this piece. Simply put, a short but amazing poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BluRaven aka Bootsy

so true, i think thats y i dnt mind the rain any more, i like it

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Distant horizons

Love it. So much said in so few words.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 19, 2012
Last Updated on April 16, 2012
Tags: writing, poem, poetry, evening, night, rain, raining, home, cold, blue, feeling

Author

Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..