Forget You

A Poem by Maroon Surreal

Tired of the everyday

Committing my eyes on you.

I wish you would stare back

And feel the same way as I do.

But my perceptions are wasted

I just wish

That I could forget you.

© 2012 Maroon Surreal

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Tai Ryens

This was really a strong poem with feelings held within. With the simple concept of this poem, my mind has invented thousands of different scenarios about real-life things. I really like that about your poems; how you state something simple only having it to lead to more intricate thoughts in the reader.
Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Tai Ryens

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BluRaven aka Bootsy

damn, ive been there b4, and that jus makes u and me that much better of a person, i loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Distant horizons

Yeah, felt like this before. Nicely done.

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Added on February 14, 2012
Last Updated on April 16, 2012
Tags: feelings, forget, love, pain, perception, poem, poetry, stare, true, writing

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Maroon Surreal

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Candles and fading sheets, I write my heart of bits. I write poems and other short stories. Really short stories. I'm still learning and willing to learn more, read more and write more. I like .. more..