A Vain Pursuit of Love

A Vain Pursuit of Love

A Poem by Poet Pittinix
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It's a poem of love.

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A svelte girl recently moved to the neighbourhood.

Her transcendent beauty catches my eyes.

I greet her warmly when she’s walking past my gate.

She told me her name, and I told her mine.

I wonder if she’s interested in middle-aged men.


Every time I look at her, it breaks my heart.

Her charm and her seductive walk captivate me.

And I believe I’m falling in love with her.

I didn’t want this to happen at my age,

For if I fall in love with her, she might reject me.


I’m hesitant about telling Katie I have feelings for her,

For I don’t think she’ll fall in love with me.

I pursued other pretty girls whom I loved,

But regrettably, I didn’t win the love of any of them.

I don’t want to pursue a girl in vain again.


All the girls of my past love affairs pursued me.

I don’t know how it feels to pursue a girl successfully.

If Katie makes advances to me, I’ll date her,

But that’s not how I want things to turn out.

I want her to accept me when I express my love to her.

© 2024 Poet Pittinix


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Poet Pittinix
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Self doubt is a difficult thing that requires risk, time, patience, determination, and perseverance to overcome. A most interesting story of building passion often called love but it may be a metaphor for that self doubt in general. Very nicely done

Posted 4 Months Ago


Poet Pittinix

4 Months Ago

Thanks for sharing your views on this piece.
Your subconscious is behind her. Don't love, Just accept as it is. Love is mad, that makes one mad. Call her for a cup of coffee. Think she is your daughter. Relationship will flourish in a different way, else sometimes disastrous. Good poem lot of psychological threads interwoven in this poem

Posted 4 Months Ago


Poet Pittinix

4 Months Ago

Love is a difficult thing to understand. Thank you for reading my composition. Your words are welcom.. read more
Arundass TP

4 Months Ago

Welcome friend 😊

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Added on August 14, 2024
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Poet Pittinix
Poet Pittinix

Kingston, West Indies, Jamaica



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Hi everyone, I'm an author from Jamaica. I write poems, songs, and short stories. Do not send me any private messages. I came here to read and to publish my compositions, not to engage in controver.. more..

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