![]() ValerieA Poem by Poet Pittinix![]() This is an intriguing love story.![]()
I met a young African girl when I was 20 years old.
Her name was Valerie, and she was very appealing. I really liked her from the first time I saw her at the youth club, But I wasn't confident of winning the love of such a fair girl. I’d only spoken to her a few times before I did a strange thing. One night I asked my friend to give Valerie a picture of me. The boy went to her home and gave her the picture. And he told her that I sent it for her. He said that she accepted the picture, and she look at it and smiled. I asked him what her response was. The surprising thing was that she didn't say anything to him. A few days later, she stopped me when I was passing her home. And she asked me, “Is this the way you do things?” I don't remember exactly what I said to her, But the short conversation we had led nowhere. She didn't give the impression of being interested in me. And I knew that another guy was trying to court her, So I didn't have a good reason to compete with him for her. From that time onward Valerie and I seldom saw each other. Even though I thought about her a lot, It didn't take a long time to get over her. I got married to a Christian lady 10 years after these things occurred. 20 more years passed, and I ran into Valerie at an electronics store. I went there to purchase a preamplifier for my sound system. At first I didn't recognize her because she had grey hair. She was 30 years older, and she looked so different. I presumed that she was the supervisor at the electronics store. She said that she had something to say to me while I was waiting. First of all, she asked me, “Do you remember me?” I took a good look at her face, and then I said no, So she asked me, “Did you live in Whitfield Town many years ago?” I realised she knew me from somewhere, so I told her yes. Then she added this question, “Do you remember a girl named Valerie?” I immediately said yes, and she responded, “It's me.” Honestly, I still didn't recognize her, But I remembered the beautiful girl I knew. Valerie said that she saw me in the store with a woman a few months ago. I told her that the woman she saw me with was my wife. Much to my surprise, she said, “I kept your picture over the years.” “I’m not sure if I still have it, I might have recently thrown it away.” I felt good knowing that she kept my picture for so many years. Seeing her brought back memories of the days of our youth, But my passion for her was a thing of the past. I didn't ask her why she kept my picture for such a long time. She was obviously carrying a torch for me. No woman would keep the picture of a man she doesn't love for 30 years. © 2024 Poet PittinixAuthor's Note
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Added on April 25, 2024 Last Updated on April 25, 2024 Tags: African girl, love, picture, years, sound system Author![]() Poet PittinixKingston, West Indies, JamaicaAboutHi everyone, I'm an author from Jamaica. I write poems, songs, and short stories. Do not send me any private messages. I came here to read and to publish my compositions, not to engage in controver.. more..Writing
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