Out of View

This is a love poem with rhymes.

I was standing there alone

Nobody called my phone

You came into view

And I didn’t know what to do

My mind just blew

I was speechless when I saw you

You resembled a girl I knew,

So I began to stare at you

My eyes examined your physique,

But that was no surprise

You were beautiful as the sunrise

I decided to tell you something nice

Even if I had to pay the price

 

Things were going just fine

And you were so kind

I really liked your perfume

It’s a pity you had to leave so soon

Someone came to pick you up at noon

You didn’t appreciate the ride,

But you couldn’t hide

Something didn’t seem right

You started to get uptight

Then the car drove out of sight

I felt concerned about you that night

Now that you’re out of view,

All I do is think about you

Author's Note

Have fun, readers.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Interesting read. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[Poet Pittinix]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

[MrBlack202]

It's a nice poem with good structure.

[Poet Pittinix]

Thank you for the encouraging review.