Chapter 2 - Time

              One of the choices everyone makes but few understand, is with whom we spend the time we have. How much we have of it is unknown to us. It may be decided at the beginning of our lives or during by our actions.

             What we do know and what we can do is use it for what we consider valuable and important. And is not only the quantity we have to consider but also the quality. I would prefer to pass ten days close to a woman's mind than a hundred next to a girl's body. Others may prefer the contrary.

             In the end it only leads to another dilemma. Quality or quantity? There is no right or wrong choice. If you ask me quantity can change and vary easily but quality.. is quite a rare feature these days. Rare and precious.

Reviews

[Jennie Lynn]

Those first two lines are very impactful. I think that everyone realizes we make choices everyday as to whom we spend our time with but then to follow that up with a reminder that we have no idea how much time we have felt like a slap to the face (but in a good way). I don't know that we consider that when deciding how we spend our time. Live every moment as if it's your last?

I too liked the line "I would prefer to pass ten days close to a woman's mind than a hundred next to a girl's body." It's so wonderfully worded. So simple an example of a complicated issue. Great job.

[Flutterby aish]

" I would prefer to pass ten days close to a woman's mind than a hundred next to a girl's body. " A thought like that, is what brings a smile to my face. A rare perception, but one highly appreciated. A nice piece. Keep writing. :)