Now I am me

Think you can hurt me

With your words

Sometimes yeah you do

Not anymore my friend

 

Say what you wish

I am now a strong girl

I can hide what you say

Way down these days

Say what you want

And more on.

 

I have no life's purpose

Only to annoy you

I don't need anyone else this is enough for me

I have no soul I have no heart

You're right

I gave them away a long time ago.

Author's Note

anything that you see wrong with it please tell me

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

Like the transformation of emotions throughout the piece, moving throughout the stanzas and changing each time to behold a new meaning and feeling defiance and strength to acceptance and in a way a sense of defeat. Good job

[DreyaArt]

lovely poem thank you for writing. well written. there were some spelling mistakes..
second line "With you words." -- should be "your"
second verse, second line "I am now a stong girl." --should be "strong"
last verse, first line "I have no lifes perpose" -- Should be "life's" and "purpose"
last verse, fourth line, "I have no sole" -- should be "soul"
last verse, fifth line, "Your right." -- should be "You're" as in you are.

I think thats it, and I believe I spelt those all correctly, but my typing is bad right nnowbecaue the keyboard is being dumb :)
Thank you for writing, blessed be.

[kieran cruz]

That's an amazing poem
Really well written
I'm gonna be a pain and say check your spelling lol