Your Heart

I saw you fall

I saw the pain

No one else did

I saw what they did

After what I did.

 

For it all I am sorry

Never wished to do something like that

I told you I am a monster

You didn't believe me

Told me that it wasn't funny

It wasn't a joke.

 

Now I will never see that joy in your eyes again

I'll see the pain we all caused you

I wish I could take it away
I don't want you to feel that way

I want to replace your memories

The bad ones

With good ones

How your life could have been.

 

If you had never met me

I'm sorry I had your heart

And yet I was the one who saw it all

The fall

The pain

And more

Forever more I will be sorry

Forever marked

With blood stained hand

I crushed your heart

I am so sorry.

Author's Note

Any spelling mistakes please tell me and I will change them thanks

Reviews

[POeticPotato]

Interesting read, it's obvious you wrote this poem with an idea in mind of what happened to the main character and their friend/lover. The pacing and run-on sentences are a really good way the express the disjointedness and confusion of one's thoughts in the face of grief, and I can really feel the emotion from your piece.

[DreyaArt]

From what I could see, there weren't any spelling mistakes, but then again I am a terrible speller.
Sad writing, beautiful and sad.
I hope that if you are truly feeling this, for some one, or because of some one, that this helped you to feel better.

[E.V. Black]

Loved everything about this. It really struck me.
The only thing I advise to change is "staned" to "stained." I believe that was a typo.