Hidding

Hidding

A Poem by markedforever

I love you

But you don't know me

Not the real me

 

To tell you the truth

No one does

And they never will

 

I hide the real me

I hide how I really feel

I hide what I really think

 

If only everyone knew me

How I feel on the inside

What I really think

 

Then you would all see

See why I am like I am

Why I hide what I'm really like

Why I hide what I really feel

Why I hide everything

 

If only!

If only you knew

But then so would everyone else

 

The reason I hide myself

Is hidden way inside

Where you would never find it

 

So if you come looking

Your only looking for trouble

Your only looking for something,

That you will never find.

© 2011 markedforever


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Good one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautifully universal - I think a lot of people the world over can relate to this. Good job!
PS. My only correction would be to make it "you're" in the 2nd and 3rd line at the end :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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markedforever
markedforever

Banbury, United Kingdom



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Im Lauren, Im 18, from Banbury, love writing poetry, I also enjoy reading just about anything. Most poetry I write is writen on my life or feeling and yes they are a little depressing but that is me. more..

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