Functioning

Functioning

A Story by Honey
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and this is why people need to sleep regularly. as you can see, i can no longer write things that are relative to each other...

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They say I'm not right. That I cannot function correctly anymore. It has been a long time since I have gone insane, and now I can no longer sleep. I fear the most irrational things, when before I used to fear nothing. I can no longer sleep through the night; I wake up often from splendid dreams of my own death. I need to escape. I want to leave, but I cannot. I do not have the means to get there, nor the courage to start. Until then, I will try to sleep properly so that they won't worry. But when they ask I will tell them, "There is a reason I don't sleep in my bed."

© 2011 Honey


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I like it when people write things like this, errors and all, it shows just how naturally creative they can be. Once something is eddited it becomes forced and boring. Fresh off the mind is always nicer to read, it's beautiful and poetic no matter how badly it is written and what the subject matter is. One of my favourite things is to read amateur writings just to refresh my mind before I get plunged into the proof read, spellchecked, editted literary ocean of todays works.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like it when people write things like this, errors and all, it shows just how naturally creative they can be. Once something is eddited it becomes forced and boring. Fresh off the mind is always nicer to read, it's beautiful and poetic no matter how badly it is written and what the subject matter is. One of my favourite things is to read amateur writings just to refresh my mind before I get plunged into the proof read, spellchecked, editted literary ocean of todays works.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wrote this when i was half asleep, so it kinda needs some (or a lot) of editing

Posted 14 Years Ago


BRILLIANT!

P.s. The worst feeling in the world is when, for a split second, you rock back in your chair to far.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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