Lost

Where did you go?

I just want you back

But now you are useless

Your future is black

What hurts me the most

And causes me dismay

Is the fact you lost hope

When we had talked each day

Reviews

[lily platycorn]

"What hurts me the most
And causes me dismay
Is the fact you lost hope
When we had talked each day"
This is so sad but so beautiful...

[Moflo]

Good display of emotion...and its a feeling I have felt before, so I can relate. This is very good, especially for its simple structure and rhymes. Nice write!