Making my Mark

writing this cuz it just snowed ^-^ (waah... snooowww ^0^)

Walking around on the fluffy white snow

Making my mark wherever I go

The flurries falling down onto my face

And settling softly where there is space

I have walked for a long time on the frozen ground

The wind whips my hair as I turn around

I see all the places that I've been unfurl

Now I have made my own mark on the world

Reviews

[Kiki]

WOAH! this is really good! me be jealous.... :^]

[Charlie]

AH-MAZ-ING!!! You're really talented and I LUV YOU!!!

your sister,

Charlie

[Moflo]

I really like the idea of comparing a footprint in the snow to your footprint on the world. This was a very nice poem and I liked it.

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautiful exploration of the world, leaving footprints in snow... leaving your mark on the world.. I just love making a path across freshly fallen snow!

[thatscenechikkmarie(:]

I love this poem. It makes sense and not to mention it reminds me of what time of the year it is for me here. I love the ending line, thats what alot of us aim to do.