Love On the Beach - Sometime

Love On the Beach - Sometime

A Story by Dave
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This is another side of the story Love on the Beach also available here.

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                             Love on the Beach - Sometime

  The sea was kind to me that day, it allowed me to easily take my board out to

  the breaking waves.  Each wave provided me with a ride that filled me with

  joy.  As the day was getting longer I was beginning to feel tiredness in my

  legs.  I was thinking of one last surf, when I saw her.  She was strolling along the 

  waters' edge in her white suit, its'  color matching my own.  I couldn't make out

  her face, but her golden tresses wafted in the off-shore breeze looking

  beautiful.  Without realizing it my board was carrying me close to where she

  was.  Now I could see, in the shortened distance, her blue eyes and well-

  sculpted figure.  As I neared the waters' edge I saw her watching and smiling. 

  She walked boldly up to me.

  "You're pretty good at this aren't you?" she asked.

   "I don't know how good, but I enjoy it.  Have you ever tried it?"

   "No, I haven't, but I've always wanted too."

   "I'd love to teach you, but it's getting dark now."

   "You may not have noticed, but I've watched you for some time.  I got very

   excited when I saw some of the larger waves you rode."

  Together we carried my board up to where her blanket was laid out on the

  sand.

   "I'd be glad to show you how tomorrow,  if you wish." I told her.

   We were sitting close together on her blanket.

   "I told you that watching you excited me, shall I show you?"

   Pushing me onto my back she lay across and kissed me.  I was amazed at how

   quickly her bathing suit disappeared and then she removed mine as well.

   "I want to feel  as though I were one of those waves you rode so smooth and

   easily ." she told me and then she did.

   

© 2024 Dave


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Gleenda - I just try to go with the flow. I, for the most part, try not to get too explicit. I'd rather leave what comes next to the readers' imagination. In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Take care - Dave.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glenda

1 Month Ago

Imma try that! Thanks, buddy!
Dave

1 Month Ago

You're more than welcome.
Have a marvelous day - Dave
Glenda

1 Month Ago

Dave, I did try it and it was a big flop! I think it drove me into a bit of depression. But I'm over.. read more
wows! Dave! You know, I write kind of explicit but no matter how I try, mine just do not sound romantic like this!
Awesome job! Thanks!

Posted 1 Month Ago



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David B. Pincus I am a retired teacher. I have taught in grades 5th-8th in New Jersey. I am married and have two grown daughters and four grandsons. I enjoy playing tennis and traveling. With m.. more..

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