Day Sail

Day Sail

The wind in her sails as she goes surging across the waters.

Sleek, white her deck the finest teak, mast reaching high

her blossoming white sails billowing out into the blue sky

contrasted slightly with the puffy clouds floating overhead.

Standing at the bow, golden strands blowing over her shoulders

taut figure filling her bathing suit, proud breasts pointing the way.

Tanned legs splayed easily keeping her balance against the waves

she laughs at the water washing over the deck, into the cockpit.

Enjoying the sea as much as she, gulls screech far above her.

She beckons to me to join her, to hold her closely in my arms.

Together feeling the rushing wind that fills the sails, water on the deck

Basking in the bright sunlight, we kiss a sweet windy, wet welcome.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful vision you create by your words. To sail and to enjoy the day. Always a wonderful place to know. Thank you Dave for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Onlyme]

This was picturesque Dave, romantic, passionate and so sweet. I could picture this inside my mind's eye playing. And hearing the seagulls screech as she sailed towards me.

[Dave]

Dawn - I'm glad you enjoyed the "view". I'm away now in N.C. visiting daughter and grandkids. Later today I'll be psting a new poem. "Moonlight on the
Lake. Hope you like it too.

Take care - Dave

[Onlyme]

Hi Dave, hope your having a wonderful time with the daughter and grandkids?. But I know the answer already. YOU ARE. I will look out for your new poem too.

Keep safe and happy Dave to you and your wife and family. hugs. Dawn.

[Dave]

Thank you - Dave

[kentuck14]

Okay Dave, this is more like Day (Dream) Sail!! Oh well . . .

[Dave]

Oh well - indeed - you would have loved to be there.

Take care - Dave

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a descriptive love story for those with sea legs lol!

[Chris Shaw]

That was an exhilarating trip you took your readers on Dave. Skimming over the water, tasting the salt on my lips and a spot of romance thrown in for added measure. Very nicely conveyed lines. Thank you.

Chris

[Dave]

Glad you enjoyed it. What's a nice day of sailing without a little romance?

Take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

We all need romance Dave. That keeps the world spinning. All the best.

[barleygirl]

Very well-done way to weave the details & movement of the sea as threads to convey sensuality. My favorite way to describe attraction between people is to liken it to something compelling in one's natural surroundings, as you've done here. Nice balance between natural sensuality & literal physical attraction between humans (((HUGS)))