So Near To Me

"So Near To Me"

In the growing dark of night I feel you near me

hoping that together we'll find the light of love.

The moment of evening chill has past, you are near

not touching, I know the warmth of your being here

a strong thought is all it takes, with you so near me.

With you the dark of night gives way to evening stars

each twinkling a warm, fond hello to your glowing smile.

Setting the stage for the orb taking possession of the sky.

You are near me, so near to me in its' encompassing glow.

We are as one, so near in its' glorious, heavenly light.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful, tender and full of the romance of the night. Moonlight and stars included. Lovely work.

Chris

[Giulia King]

Dear Dave, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I loved every single word!
"With you the dark of night gives way to evening stars
each twinkling a warm, fond hello to your glowing smile." That line stood out the most for me. Probably because I think stars are so beautiful and magical.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Encompassing the sensation of the night and great written imagery combine for a wonderful romantic story.well done as always

[Dave]

Thank you Sam -
I find I do some of my best work, writing - relative to night.

Take care - Dave

[Samuel Dickens]

Perhaps it the quietness of night that opens the mind to these romantic thoughts. Here, you spread them out in a star-strewn, heavenly display.

[sette]

it has always been an amazing write where you are concerned and this is one of them.