The Marks

Moving pens, they blot and dance

Printing history with master's hand

Trouble in the silence still there's masterpiece

This work of art, not all people can please

Draining hours like clothes in the sun

or marathon during the fun run

speak the truth, make it simple

Express the word, touching people

Reviews

[Peach]

It's really simple yet it's message is meaningful in it's own way. Keep up the great work

[MARK my Word]

Thank you so much for the review. :-)

[Belle]

This made me think of the quote from Jose Rizal : " Pen is mightier than any other sword." Indeed it is, the power of our pen, of our words can illuminate a dark world, can create impact, can make a change thus our words can build and/or can destroy.

I really liked the imagery of this short yet powerful poem. evidently expressionism and imagism are relative to each other...Mark, keep on penning, you are just starting to weave words yet the natural power of your words is already undeniable.

[MARK my Word]

Really? such an incredible review that I can hardly accept that it is true...
thank you for that... I am inspired to write again..... thank you Belle....

[Dhaye]

Concise but speaks volume, Kabayan. I love the concept of a piece of writing which can be considered a masterpiece for it touches and leaves a mark in the lives of people. Only the truth can do this. They always say that simplicity is beauty...and with that "simple thing" in our eyes, we can touch someone's life.

I have read a simple but remarkable piece today. Thanks for the share. Happy writing!

[MARK my Word]

Oh .. thank you so much for the review..... I highly appreciate it....

[Lydia Shutter]

Keep it simple....yes, that is so true. Sometimes expressing your thoughts in twenty lines or less is the only way to ensure your words will be read. Publishers often insist poetry be kept to a maximum of twenty lines. One little correction... "Trouble in the silence still their's masterpiece" Not sure what you mean by this line. One thing is for sure, though..."theirs" never has an apostrophe in it. Lydi**

[MARK my Word]

Oh! Thank you for the review madam Lydia....
I am happy that someone can relate to what I have written.
And I also thank you for your observation, a typographical mistake was committed.
It must be "there's" not "their's"
Thank you madam. :-)

[Shaquana Adams]

speak the truth, make it simple
Express the word, touching people.

I love this. Simply brilliant :)

[MARK my Word]

Thank you so much :-)

[Shaquana Adams]

You're welcome :)