Time

Tick tock tick tock

running to the place of nowhere

chased by the Big Ben

and wanting to escape from the illusion

looking into the senses of human eye

screaming heart bothered mind

accepting the present 

though it seems to be hard

One step towards your future:

leaving yesterday for a closer tomorrow

Reviews

[Kalen Luciano]

Love the poem especially the last lines: One step towards your future:
leaving yesterday for a closer tomorrow
Beautiful way to end the poem

[MARK my Word]

Thank you so much Kalen....
I am happy that someone like it... :-)

[Shaquana Adams]

One step towards your future:
leaving yesterday for a closer tomorrow

I really like the way you end your poems. Very creative and enticing. :)

[MARK my Word]

Thank you so much Shaquana :-)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Tick tack tick tack
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Tick tock tick tock

the rest of this seems a solid read about time...

your last line:

One step towards your future:
leaving yesterday for a closer tomorrow

you must live in the moment...unless you know the future that is already written before hand...Time is an illusion...just a way to keep us in order...to get from place to place...you're 4 minutes into the future each start of your day...people do not notice that...

[MARK my Word]

Thank you for your review and thank you also for correcting the first line of my poem, I will take note of it.

I agree with what you have said that "you must live in the moment...unless you know the future that is already written before hand..." because i believe that whatever we do in the present Is a reflection on who we will become in the future that is why I mentioned in the second from the last line "One step towards your future:" which pertains to an action in the present because living in the moment is important.

Above all, I thank you so much for taking a time to review my poem. I appreciate your effort Sir Glen.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...well put in the lines...