Beyond Fish Bowl

Rapture is not followed
As water has no path

The air in your fish bowl
May seem hollow
However, there is a world
Full
Beyond the reflective glass
Peer through
If you may
If not
Its ok
You'll die
Someday

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

I like the metaphors you inclided. We all are like goldfish in a gold bowl.

[Mark Mendoza]

Hey thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great metaphor here...life is often like a fish bowl...we are watched, scrutinized like we are fish in an aquarium...and the only way to stop that is to die...
but those who look at us and judge us need to look at their reflections in the glass...imagine what they would see.
j.

[Mark Mendoza]

One ugly fish I'd imagine . Yet, I have hope for those ugly fish. For one day they will perhaps return to the seas a bit more elegant . Perhaps a sea turtle or dolphin . Thanks for reading j.