Dual Singularity

Marriage vows
Bind, Unite
Two become one
Why then 
are so many 
reduced
to dual singularity

His car
Her car
step one

his friends
her friends
step two

his job
her job
step three

his interest
her interest
step four

his side
her side
step five

his lawyer
her lawyer

singularity
 

Reviews

[Mountain Dawn]

Very true. Individualism has reached an all time high. I was raised to believe a marriage was a partnership and two become one, but people are so afraid of releasing control and afraid of losing themselves they forget that and set themselves up to fail.
Very good piece.

[MarilynT]

Thank you so much sorry it has been 7 years :(

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Interesting poem that definetely provokes some thought.

Why then
are so many
are reduced
to dual singularity

I think that this sentence needs some revising. Though it is a very good question.
Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha