Rain Dance

We waltz
rain dancing
upon our heads
our shoulders
gentle notes

laughing freely
you spin me
wet grass
bare feet
dance lightly

thunder booms
a small squeal
of surprise
escapes
my lips

pulled close
a tender kiss
strong hands
gently smooth
wet hair.

Reviews

[Davia Lynn Bradley]

well done, a little choppy, but the excellent visuals make up for that. I love dancing in the rain with my other half, it's always quite fun. welcome to the cafe ^-^