In My Absence

surrealist poetry

You will understand the sense of 

love, and cold raindrops will fall 

down from an eye of the sky. 

The words will resound through 

this abstruse darkness of the

night.Your sadness will be flooded. 

Reviews

[Lisa Victoria]

Wonderful use of imagery...a beautiful piece:)

[bobc]

Feels like you incorporated the title into the first line of the poem...is that right? Overall, nicely done...liked the use of the word 'abstruse'. ...bob