Tell me you love me

Tell me you love me

A Poem by Mariana

If you want to tell me something

anything at all

please tell me that you love me

 

That without me

you can't see

what's right in front of you...

 

That without me,

your sun can't shine.

 

That I am your everything

just like you are my everything

 

That I mean too much to you

that without me you are truly blue

and you can't do

what you can

if I'm not there to watch you

Tell me that you love me

because I know you do

but I want to hear it from you

so tell me what I want to hear...

tell me that you love me

and I'll say, "I love you too." 

 

© 2009 Mariana


Author's Note

Mariana
its just a thought.... nothing serious
:D

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I'm so enviouis. You're such a good writer.

"so tell me what I want to hear...

tell me that you love me

and I'll say, "I love you too." This just did it for me. It really ended the poem with a bang. Whether it was serious or not, it's perfect. You did such a great job. Great emotion and creativity. Keep it up!


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Thanks :) I'm really glad someone likes it ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm so enviouis. You're such a good writer.

"so tell me what I want to hear...

tell me that you love me

and I'll say, "I love you too." This just did it for me. It really ended the poem with a bang. Whether it was serious or not, it's perfect. You did such a great job. Great emotion and creativity. Keep it up!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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hahahahahahahaha i effin LOVE ITTTTTT.
it's likeee

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