if things were different

if things were different

A Poem by Mariana

I don't know how to explain this

but here it goes....

if things were different,

by that, i mean you...

then i would be so happy!

 

the thing is that....

i thought you were different

you know,

you'd fall for the nice, funny, smart girl...

that has  a body, but not a super model's body

 

you know, the brunette that you see everday?

I'm talking about me!

but no! you have to fall for the girl

that has no brain, a model's body, and an ugly face!

 

but noooooo! you don't look for the face, you look for a body....

What does she have?

you told me yourself, that you want a girl with a brain!

well, she doesnt have one!

 

I'm over-reacting to this...

but you told me that your friends bugged you about

the girl you liked....

how can they bug you about the model's body girl!

 

you described her in these words:

* has a body

* a brain

*she's funny

*and she is a brunette

 

well the super model! isn't funny

YOU don't know how much it hurts me

when you say :

"I would never think of dating you!"

 

think before you say, ****

you don't care about other people's feelings...

i'm trying to ignore you, but you don't want to lose me

because my friendship with you

means something

 

I want to ask a favor of you....

Will you please leave me alone?

Give me my space...?
and help me to forget about you??

I just have to stop liking you

for now....

but i will never forget

the feeling that i felt for you...

the feeling i thought was love!

© 2008 Mariana


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nice.
maybe, if your poem has a twist, that guy just have done it to make you jealous.


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Added on December 30, 2008

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Mariana
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