Everything's changing

Everything's changing

A Poem by Mariana

Ever since I met you,

I knew that you would end up

hurting a sweet girl named Mariana...

but I changed...

 

Everything's changing..

the way my sweetness would flow

suddenly forgot to grow..

now these tears of joy

turn to tears of hate...

 

love is gone,

its like a bird on high!

Its like a bird

it only flies away

it has no home

it doesn't have a soul

 

how much longer

 

© 2008 Mariana


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a pretty good poem, somehow reminds me of the song "Everybody's Changing" by Keane. it has a simple flow, not unnecessarily complicated and the thought is well expressed. The last line is very effective.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on July 12, 2008

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Mariana
Mariana

San Juan, PR



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