Daffodils

The soul is striving to spread its wings

To feel the Spring and daffodils,

To absorb the scent caressing mind,

I am the sunlight with auburn lips.

I hope the sun forgives depression

Once concealing imagination

A taste of honey has its brightness

The daffodil's blossom-innocent passion

Reviews

[Papaya]

I am the sunlight with auburn lips.
I hope the sun forgives depression

Such beautiful lines and a hopeful outlook. I really enjoyed your poem.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Innocent passion and bright beauty -leave the badness and sadness in the blooming of each one- where love shines bright it overcomes all denied emotions and lost hope- I pray as each one blooms your heart is set aflight🌹wonderful words, love it🌹

[Eddie Phillips]

I love the line:
"I hope the sun forgives depression"
It places a break in this beautiful poem that shows the shadow that lies within beauty. I really liked this poem Maria and I can't wait to read your other poems.

[The Twin Arenas]

February is by the far the cruelest of months. If I had been a Roman emperor, it would have been the first to fight the lions.

"I hope the sun forgives depression" is a nice, simple line. To work the words "hope", "sun", "forgives", and "depression" into a line without making a horrible mess of it all is no small thing. Good writing.

[SleeplessVolcano]

It’s amazing how a simple thing like a smell, or a picture, or a memory can trigger creative expression......

Beautiful poetry.

How about jasmine next ;)

[Maria]

I was thinking the same.. I just bought daffodils and felt something really special for me. Thank you for review

[UN]

Daffodils and honey, two of my favorites! Flowers are such a wonderful source of imagery

[Maria]

the smell of daffodils made me write this poem

[Richard🖌]

Ohhh, Maria!
What could be more enthrallingly beautiful than this perfect poem in homage to daffodils and your metaphorical touches of heart and passion in such vividly sweet imagery, and your picture … OMG!
Breathlessly, heavenly perfect, everything!

I love it dearly … thank you for sharing You✨⁓ Richard

[Maria]

you can always motivate me for more :*