"Her Heart is Weak"

In this poem I simply tried to describe myself.Always making various mistakes but never weak enough to be broken.

Her heart is weak,

Overwhelming emotions

Make her feel astray,

Covered by the deep and scary ocean.

Her heart is weak,

But stronger  than the darkness,

That disappears,

When the sun desires to be brighter.

Her heart is weak,

Giving away its passion and roses

To be forgotten, or tortured like a child lost in the forest.

Her heart is weak,

Rescuing those who will never be worthy

But incorrigibly stubborn,

Repeating mistakes, that never let her to be broken.

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Twin Arenas]

It's funny how weak hearts always take the most on. Weak people don't, but weak hearts do.

[Maria]

yeah.. that is very ironic..though someone might seem weak but actually not ))

[The Twin Arenas]

Weak to the temptations of the heart.

[Maria]

but strong enough to survive

[The Twin Arenas]

A heart beat not beaten.

[poetgurl]

love the last 3 lines a lot, wonderful poem full of emotions.

[Maria]

thank you..yes always trying to express the deepest emotions at the end of the poem..such a habit