Thinking of you

Romantic poem

Tonight I am thinking of you

Wanting to feel your lips on mine

Needing your soft touch on my skin

Wanting to hold you for all time

 

For some reason I want to please you

I want you all to myself and more

Wanting to eat all of your kisses

Then swallow them down to the core

 

My stomach is in pain, not of illness

Its knowing that I need you deeply

Wanting your warmth on my body

Give me your soul, I am a weakling

 

You charm me with your soul

You are a pure spirit I see

Speak your mind freely, my heart

Open your heart and soul to me.

 

With all this I am feeling

I don't know why I do

Is it because I am lonely

Or this is something new

 

I have never felt this connection

When two strange souls unite

Could destiny be playing a role

However it feels right

 

I want to say the "three words"

Yet frozen in fear to do so

Don't want to speak so soon

Or maybe you'll never know

 

I have lost a love so long ago

Along with everything I lost faith

Then you came and prove me wrong

A kiss from you made me feel safe.

Author's Note

This poem was written a year ago and never had the thought to bring it to this site so I hope you review this and tell me what you think?

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

beautifully written

[Wretched Knight]

"I have lost a love so long ao, along with everything I lost faith" ... i know how that feels. Thanks goodness we are able to move on. : )

[..]

Such a wonderful feelingful write, Awesome!

[Tenebrousoul]

Wow. That left me breathless ....