Simply Sucky

Suck on this

sappy syrian scintilla
sucks sacks of senile sultans
slurping sickly slimy sapodillas
social self-seller simpers sighs
signals sundry surfers sly
sucking sausages stiffer
sad sagging sorry sniffer

Author's Note

An award winner in a prestigious poetry magazine!

Reviews

[Marina]

Well.....it's certainly a lisp sufferer's nightmare! You have mined the dictionary for S words most astutely, Miss Marlette. And 'mining' is a very appropriate description, I believe, in regards to your theme and content. Those senile sultans would be quite happy.....if only they could remember what has occurred! Clever wordplay! 💛

[Miss Marlette]

I'm going around in circles trying to spell sapodillas. Got it right finally. Senile sultans are remarkable. Memory may fail them but they still try to mammarize it all! Thanks lovely girl.

[JE Falcon]

Seriously? So, says some serious, spontaneous Sayers of silliness, slayers of syllables, and I. --- Now my Tongggeue is all twisted. :)

[Shelley Warner]

You worked in a lot of alliteration! Pretty creative.

[Miss Marlette]

Thanks. I enjoyed scribbling this one.

[Rania M]

Deftly done Alliteration can be such fun. Trying out my own.

[Miss Marlette]

Oooooh thanks!!

[John the Baptist]

Any social seller that sucks a senile sultan will surely end sadly according to Sharia Law. Also may have bad breath.

[Miss Marlette]

A beheading by Sharia will solve the bad breath problem haharhar thank you.

[ZeppoZealand]

Hey! You tickled me good. A fine, award-winning poetry.

[Miss Marlette]

As long as it's not something more than ticklish I tickled! Heeheehaw.

[Umar Aziz]

Two appeals pertain to two appellants Marguerita and Chiquita Suckita, raising a common issue of saggybaggy backwood burritos buried in their own backyards. In both these appeals, the "judgment", has been pronounced, dictated and signed by the judge, who heard the arguments in the trials. Thereafter, a successor judge has heard arguments on a hairy fiery tarantula presently in exile, desperately trying to return and passed the orders on sentencing her to grow sapodillas in their backyard for another 60 years. No question has been raised by the learned counsel for the tarantula as to whether such " sucky pronouncements" could amount to valid judgments. Hence the sucky sentencing order may be considered final and this trial court has decided against any further hearing and judgment.
Gavel thunders!
*Aye Aye Your Honor *

[Miss Marlette]

It'll be criminal if the backwood burritos return above ground or the tarantulas ditch their backyards in favor of poetry. Please pass restraining orders your excellency!

[Tania Mo]

Slimy salty sapodillas lololololo. Must be an acquired taste. Funny gurl.

[Miss Marlette]

Acquired taste. Think of Vieux-Boulogne cheese smeared over stinky balls. Suck away!