White

this is a work in progress.

Everything burns, can you feel it?

I stand alone, consumed in these flames.

Oh, why can't you feel the heat?

It is white, white, white,

white hot

(you better run)

White, white, white,

white hot

(run faster now)

Can you feel me,

standing behind you?

I'm here right now.

Can't you see me,

In front of you?

(It's white)

I stand here crying,

for how you broke my heart.

I'm not sure about what I feel inside.

I just can not explain.

All I can think about,

Are these burning flames

It is white, white, white,

white hot

(you better run)

White, white, white,

white hot

(run faster now)

Can you feel me,

standing behind you?

I'm here right now.

Can't you see me,

In front of you?

(It's white)

Can you feel the flames?

 

I will watch you burn

Author's Note

I wrote this in a rage. I have no melody for it, yet. (hoping a friend can help me with that)
This is my first time writing lyrics, period. So I would LOVE your thoughts.

Reviews

[DreamOn2014]

I love it!! But sad to say this friend cant right music to save her life.

[MariaDahl1791]

are you talking about me or you? :P

[DreamOn2014]

I personally don't know how to write music. Sorry.

[MariaDahl1791]

Hahaha. I can't write music either. this is the first time I have EVER wrote lyrics though