Trees

Trees

A Poem by Mari Chubinidze

We brought saplings of trees,
radiant peach, apple.
We nurtured them, they bore divine fruit.
I wanted to export them, but in vain,
says the farmer from Gori to the journalists.

I cut them all down, cut them down to save my time and nerves.
I cried,
and the trees shed tears as well.
I destroyed the fruit of Eden.

© 2024 Mari Chubinidze


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I agree with Dave's comments. As you cut down all of those trees, and their falling down; it could be representing the collapse of a dream. A dream of their fruit, being exported and sold for financial reward. Indeed, it could have eventually provided enough income, for others to be employed; and perhaps allow a business partnership or even limited company to be formed.? And yet, sadly; it wasn't to be. I don't know what prevented this dream, from becoming a reality. Perhaps, some rules and regulations? Or, just the sheer competition for those particular types of fruit? On the other hand, perhaps the logistics of transporting these commodities; would not have been practical or affordable? Thankyou for sharing, and I hope that you have moved on as best you can; since this situation upset you.

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I agree with Dave's comments. As you cut down all of those trees, and their falling down; it could be representing the collapse of a dream. A dream of their fruit, being exported and sold for financial reward. Indeed, it could have eventually provided enough income, for others to be employed; and perhaps allow a business partnership or even limited company to be formed.? And yet, sadly; it wasn't to be. I don't know what prevented this dream, from becoming a reality. Perhaps, some rules and regulations? Or, just the sheer competition for those particular types of fruit? On the other hand, perhaps the logistics of transporting these commodities; would not have been practical or affordable? Thankyou for sharing, and I hope that you have moved on as best you can; since this situation upset you.

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To me this speaks of decisions of convince made and the repercussions we were not expecting, well done.

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