To My Dearest

A declaration to my first love.

C 1989

The moon is its brightest
When we sit,
And hold each other
For quite a bit.

As my love for you
Grows stronger and stronger,
We will stay sitting
Longer and longer.

Can’t you see how much
I love you, dear,
For that is why
We have grown so near.

Yes, I see how your love
Grows for me
For it hovers over
As an evergreen tree.

It never strays.
It never lies.
It’s forever living,
And never dies.

You keep me shaded
When the days are hot,
And you keep me warm
The days that are not.

So I’d like to give
A special thanks to you,
For loving me
As much as you do.

For love is
A hard thing to find,
But I’ll tell you this,
I’ve found mine!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Young love. How sweet that was. You have just sent me on a nostalgia trip. Very pleasant it was too.

Chris

[Margie F]

Thank you Chris. It is amazing how young love is so awesome and beautiful even when the couple doesn't make it. The memory makes you want to deny all that the reality of life has shown a person to be.

[Brandon]

this is amazing, it takes me back to when i was actually happy in a relationship. so thats pretty good you captured really well what makes everything so special about being in love.

[A]

Adorable! :)

Awesome poem!

[J.K.P.]

Very cute. :]