Before I comment on your poem, I have to address the most compelling thing on this page. Your devilish expression (looking beautiful) in your profile pic, next to your taunt: "you know you want to play" . . . this is almost as good as anything I've seen lately. I love the idea of "interactive" . . . engage your audience . . . you do it so well! I love this. I rarely see it here. I don't think I've had enuf coffee this morning to fire up my imagination . . . FORGET . . . S**T . . . PART . . . A STAMPEDE . . . GLEE . . . (the thesaurus is my favorite toy) *smile* Fondly, Margie
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5 Years Ago
Margie, you're a riot!! I NEVER even thought about my "devilish" expression showing up next to "you .. read moreMargie, you're a riot!! I NEVER even thought about my "devilish" expression showing up next to "you know you want to play" LOL....see sometimes, I make my own self laugh!! Thank you for pointing that out. Hilarious, and I'm not going to change it. :) Thank you for the feedback and for playing.
A passion and art indeed. That need to be expressed. Beautifully entertaining, upbeat and fun filled Margie. Enjoyed this a lot.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you so much. Did you have words come to mind that would automatically fall into those blanks b.. read moreThank you so much. Did you have words come to mind that would automatically fall into those blanks based on how the poem is designed?
I believe we must read to write. I love the ancient poets like Donne, Dryden and Ben Jonson. We, who love to write. Need something to set-us up. I have writing for 50 years and I love writing and reading still. Thank you dear Margie for sharing your words and your thoughts.
Coyote
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5 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote. I consider myself special to be among those that you have read.
5 Years Ago
You are special Margie. Keep writing and I shall keep reading. You are welcome.
Before I comment on your poem, I have to address the most compelling thing on this page. Your devilish expression (looking beautiful) in your profile pic, next to your taunt: "you know you want to play" . . . this is almost as good as anything I've seen lately. I love the idea of "interactive" . . . engage your audience . . . you do it so well! I love this. I rarely see it here. I don't think I've had enuf coffee this morning to fire up my imagination . . . FORGET . . . S**T . . . PART . . . A STAMPEDE . . . GLEE . . . (the thesaurus is my favorite toy) *smile* Fondly, Margie
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Margie, you're a riot!! I NEVER even thought about my "devilish" expression showing up next to "you .. read moreMargie, you're a riot!! I NEVER even thought about my "devilish" expression showing up next to "you know you want to play" LOL....see sometimes, I make my own self laugh!! Thank you for pointing that out. Hilarious, and I'm not going to change it. :) Thank you for the feedback and for playing.
i find this quite amusing...can imagine it said out loud just how easy words do actually __
when we are in that ___ of writing...i really ____ this poem, lots.
j.
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5 Years Ago
Oh you're mean. You're going to make me work for the response, too. ;) Beautiful. Thank you for kee.. read moreOh you're mean. You're going to make me work for the response, too. ;) Beautiful. Thank you for keeping it fun.
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