Okay, I admit one part of this puzzled me for a full five minutes, before my head caught up, but im still laughing at my own mistake at thinking everyone spoke Scottish and thought "have they got flying cows in GA?
We call cow, coo here...which would make a haiku, a cow in a penthouse :)
Cleverly done, to fit so much into a choo choo choo choo rhythm. :)
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5 Years Ago
Lorry, you can always make me laugh out loud! That was quite a funny picture. We do have the nursery.. read moreLorry, you can always make me laugh out loud! That was quite a funny picture. We do have the nursery rhyme about a cow that jumped over the moon. ;) Isn't language funny? How a simple 3 letter word can mean so many different things? Thank you so much for the compliment. I enjoyed writing it.
not only did i feel the tracks...i felt excited about getting to the zoo...
and the rhythm, like an old locomotive...the sound of the onomatopoeia used...choo choo coo coo...
life gets hard sometimes, but there are events and people who make it better...
and at one time or another we all need to be "the little engine that could"---
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5 Years Ago
Thank you J/E. This was written as a challenge from a friend. I'm always trying to think of somethin.. read moreThank you J/E. This was written as a challenge from a friend. I'm always trying to think of something he won't be expecting from me. I think I end up surprising myself more than I do him. :)
Okay, I admit one part of this puzzled me for a full five minutes, before my head caught up, but im still laughing at my own mistake at thinking everyone spoke Scottish and thought "have they got flying cows in GA?
We call cow, coo here...which would make a haiku, a cow in a penthouse :)
Cleverly done, to fit so much into a choo choo choo choo rhythm. :)
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Lorry, you can always make me laugh out loud! That was quite a funny picture. We do have the nursery.. read moreLorry, you can always make me laugh out loud! That was quite a funny picture. We do have the nursery rhyme about a cow that jumped over the moon. ;) Isn't language funny? How a simple 3 letter word can mean so many different things? Thank you so much for the compliment. I enjoyed writing it.
I'm sorry I didn't see your review until today. For some reason it didn't show up until today. Stran.. read moreI'm sorry I didn't see your review until today. For some reason it didn't show up until today. Strange. Thank you for your review. By the way, I LOVE your profile picture.
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